Comments on: Transmission http://alphabete-noir.com The fake blog of a fake writer Wed, 28 Dec 2011 09:44:30 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc By: RalOberon http://alphabete-noir.com/prosebush/transmission/comment-page-1/#comment-6032 RalOberon Wed, 28 Jul 2010 19:36:07 +0000 http://www.alphabete-noir.com/?page_id=100#comment-6032 Okay, that is wild. I don't know if this is old or new, it's rough at parts compared to your other work but wow, truly original! <b>*spoiler alert*</b> I love how the end was planned by a shadowy cabal of gigolos. I'll be honest the chat message parts were both good and bad (loved the screen name pandoras_socks) but it was hard to follow and some of the transitions were rough (as stated previously). But "Dismayed, she wondered where all of her gleeful rebellion had gone, and sighed." made my day :) P.S. fire is hot! Okay, that is wild. I don’t know if this is old or new, it’s rough at parts compared to your other work but wow, truly original! *spoiler alert* I love how the end was planned by a shadowy cabal of gigolos.

I’ll be honest the chat message parts were both good and bad (loved the screen name pandoras_socks) but it was hard to follow and some of the transitions were rough (as stated previously). But “Dismayed, she wondered where all of her gleeful rebellion had gone, and sighed.” made my day :)

P.S. fire is hot!

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